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Bastille
Contributed by
TryingMyLuck
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Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 10:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It's a fine balance I'm striking here
between walling myself up and letting you catch a glimpse.
Constantly rebuilding, just to let you break through.
A hypocritical battle as I've set my sights so deeply on you.
I know it isn't fair to take so much and offer much less,
but so it goes.
Brick by brick they go up,
waiting for you to knock them down,
to tear me asunder.
And I do want them shattered,
to stand in the center of the ruins
of all my insecurities, all my expectations
and to stand there with you.
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TryingMyLuck
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2010-09-11 22:57:05]
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Re: Bastille
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 11:48:32 PM AEST
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| Strong heartfelt write, showing strength of character determination and emotional intelligence with an overall yearning for the summarising last line..... to stand there with you, |
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Re: Bastille
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 02:54:28 AM AEST
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| How on earth did you manage to write all that on a fly? LOL |
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Re: Bastille
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 08:08:29 PM AEST
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| I love this and can relate, the last four lines of this are so honest and touching |
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Re: Bastille
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by doeyd on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 09:31:40 AM AEST
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| good stuff |
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