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flashlight 4603

Contributed by smilinjlo17 on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



When Darkness Falls,
I see no light
i need much light
to hold me tight
i am scared of the lady
that takes our teeth
i am scared of the mask
that she lies beneath
Have you seen the child
she has yet to take
He is only but a boy
that is not much a man
in the shadow of a lake
He cannot seem to find his light
because his satchel is out of his sight.

I feel for the boy
yet I cannot find
Find him in the darkness
where I cannot hide
you cannot stand still
you cannot breath
you cannot live
with out a glare of light
through your sleeve
turn up the lantern
click the switch
the old lady is coming
hurry up, time is a *****
tug the wall, do not hide the light
single file, try not to fight
fight for the light
fight for the strength
to get through this night
and the pain that comes with the length
are you scared
are you there
do you see that it may be over
yet we all are still waiting
waiting with a deep, dark, lit up glare




Copyright © smilinjlo17 ... [ 2003-04-19 10:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: flashlight 4603 (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:53:46 AM AEST
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I think your poem did a better job catching the scarry parts, then the movie did lol. It was a good poem. ~Day~


Re: flashlight 4603 (User Rating: 1 )
by youngpoet1989 on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:23:16 PM AEST
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I haven't seen the movie, but I like your poem :)


Re: flashlight 4603 (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:22:55 PM AEST
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great job.I need too see the movie now.
Michelle




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