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words i'm selling
Contributed by
going
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Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:40:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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a dead puppet
whose tethers will do no good
neither wrenching pull nor delicate adjustment
will make the puppet dance again
the belly swells and bursts
the cotton blows away
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Re: words i'm selling
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:45:38 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC.
good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: words i'm selling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pidge on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 09:19:00 AM AEST (User
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Really good piece of poetry.
Love the abstract theme. |
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