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In The Land Where I Live
Contributed by
pURePOISON
on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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In the land where I live
Lonely lovely smiles fade
Cold claustrophobic walls, a big charade
Never fitting anywhere at all
A puzzle piece broken and betrayed
A book with no title
Ripped and frayed
In the land where I live
Ghosts of lost souls
And holes in the ground
a waste land that will never be found
Rocky cliffs
Blood filled seas
Lifeless bodies filled with disease
In the land where I live
Whispers in the night, a death delight
No need to fight, No end in sight
Find me…
Save me…
Can’t find the love you say you gave me
I promise God I will behave
The day you put me in my grave…
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Re: In The Land Where I Live
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by Pidge on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 08:05:42 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem.
It reminds me of teenage angst; anger, hurt and maybe a glimpse of hope all rolled into one.
I'm sure many a person can relate this to those years. |
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Re: In The Land Where I Live
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 09:36:24 AM AEST
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It's the first time I've actually seen your writing I knew you wrote but never knew you did it so well, I like it
Keep posting
Hope to read more soon
-Voice |
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