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Because of You.
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:11:09 PM in AEST
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Life for me used to be misery
Now I have something new
Now I have you
I've experienced happiness
You've taken me out of my sadness
I remember talking to you
To me you always look pretty
You said I don't believe you
My thought towards my love
It's a pity
that you don't think you're so pretty
Believe me
See what I see
I see a beautiful light
that saved me from a life full of self given plight
Brighter then anything I've ever seen
You shine you glisten you gleam
So beautifully
You took me
Out of a life of misery
And now I have a chance at happiness
Because of You.
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Voice of the Silent
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2010-09-11 18:11:09]
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Re: Because of You.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 06:15:35 PM AEST
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This write is simply beautiful and I'd say worth waiting for.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Because of You.
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 11:32:54 PM AEST
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| Lovely to read something so uplifting and positive glad things have changed for you |
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Re: Because of You.
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by PreciousKitten on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 11:36:07 AM AEST
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| this poem is amazing and it reminds me of how young love really is. i enjoyed it. keep writing |
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Re: Because of You.
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by Bexstasy on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 02:28:08 PM AEST
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| This is just lovely. :) |
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Re: Because of You.
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 07:47:45 PM AEST
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| I am so happy for you, this is a lovely write. Love is amazing. |
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Re: Because of You.
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by voyage on
Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 02:52:28 PM AEST
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| This is so sweet and nice. I know how it feels when you find someon who makes you feel this way. Hold on to it and make it grow. |
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Re: Because of You.
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 07:53:27 PM AEST
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Your happiness spilled freely here, I am happy for you! Lovely write!
Michelle |
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