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As i say good bye
Contributed by
jordanarce17
on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 10:29:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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everyday and every night i wish i can say good bye.
as you cry.
I try to fight.
the blood from my wrist is every night.
I wish i had time, but time has passed.
as it strikes midnight i say good bye.
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Re: As i say good bye
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 11:47:51 AM AEST
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Sounds like a very dark time for yourself. I hope all is well now. Good poem.
All the best, Chris. |
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Re: As i say good bye
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by natizzle on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 06:50:30 PM AEST
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| awesome write. hope you're alright now. |
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Re: As i say good bye
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by JJAA_91 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 05:13:26 PM AEST
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i can completely empathise. i still get like that sometimes. beautiful write. wish you all the best
xx |
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