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WEEPS TEARS
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 04:44:11 PM in AEST
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Fortune and fame is only folly.
Simply love your neighbors, be kind.
All this bickering only hates love.
My people, you've lost your minds
My God weeps tears of blood.
So many have missed the mark.
God (love) why can't they see?
It's about love deep in your heart.
You've taken love turned to hate.
You holler and scream a disgrace.
Lay down your weapons and try.
Bloody tears stream from my face.
Your love for money, feeble power.
Now you mumble, scream hatred.
Try to be gentle as I do for you.
You beat down my name and degrade.
My lost children, it's not too late .
Be humble , practice kindness for all.
You condemn your own spirit and soul.
Learn love, kindliness, my heavenly call.
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emystar
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by venkat on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 05:00:42 PM AEST
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"Lay down your weapons and try.
Bloody tears stream from my face"
-My friend This poem touches my heart
and moves me a lot...simply great.
Humbly..yours..:-) venkat
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 06:27:07 PM AEST
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Hey, Grrlfriend, this is really touching. Powerful message here grrl... Glad I saw this..
Hugs & Tears
Jenni |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 12:11:48 AM AEST
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| Great summary of the world's madness right now and man's insistence on violence and hate to replace love wisdom and integrity we need more voices like yours x |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 12:42:12 AM AEST
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Great message and I know where you're coming from. Unfortunately they don't even have deaf ears, some have no ears at all.
Nice job, Emy!!!
Tim
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 02:24:16 AM AEST
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This is very strong and powerful. Everything you touch on is oh so right, but will anyone listen?
All the best, Chris. |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by neverlosehope on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 09:08:49 AM AEST
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Hi
Its a really strong and powerful message. A really interesting poem. you wrote it well. thanks for sharing it xxx |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 05:22:09 PM AEST
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Once again you have come up trumps with this.
Great write as ever, an inspiration to us all !!
Steve |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 07:32:20 AM AEST
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| Not many truer words... Nicely done |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 07:55:56 PM AEST
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Powerful and so very true my dear Emy.
Love this write
Hugs you
Michelle |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 11:27:13 AM AEST
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| you are amazing. this must be about all the petty crimes in the world (understood from 'many have missed their mark) wonderful |
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Re: WEEPS TEARS
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by huwbeauty on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 02:50:58 AM AEST
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So much truth in this Emy,It's good to see someone else sees the world for what it is(not just you but all those that have commented on this great write).It seems that people will do anything to get ahead in this world and not care who they hurt in the process(even their own kin).If there were more people with your sentiments the world would be a much better place.
Wonderful write,
Mat. |
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