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nobody
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 11:51:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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breath held
air as close
as a thunderstorm
moving in
a sideways
lurch of reality
not quite
hiding the terrible
goings' on
pale as a picture-book
Aurora with open
stranger-eyes
with a hole
in the center
of better-day
dreams.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-09-10 11:51:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: nobody
(User Rating: 1 ) by Debris on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 05:03:43 AM AEST (User
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I love the simplicity of this writing style, yet the complexity of its meaning. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: nobody
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumnlady on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 06:16:13 AM AEST (User
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It's quite hard to figure out what it's about... however, the poem is simple - and there is a beauty in simplicity :) |
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