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doubt
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 10:55:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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my crow eyes
full-blown
dark
spangled
vision
fragments
split head
excessive
clarity
between
blank walls
of time
muscle reflex
perhaps
heart
waiting
to turn
abstract
then...
disappear.
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ming
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2010-09-10 10:55:49]
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Re: doubt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 07:06:08 PM AEST
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| Really, quite good. |
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Re: doubt
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 01:36:45 AM AEST
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*sigh*
We always have doubts and even though, yeah, definitely abstract/ambiguous, this seems to convey that message to me...perhaps even a little panic and worry:
muscle reflex
perhaps
heart
Take care,
Tim
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