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fingerprints & snowflakes
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 10:20:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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double enchanted
chanting
like a cricket
trapped
behind
a wall
no space
and
the entire
uniVERSE
expands
tell your
story
living
off the page
a shout of
silence
a map of
heart
spiderwebbed
snowflaked
fingerprinted
soley.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-09-10 10:20:35]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: fingerprints & snowflakes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 04:39:06 AM AEST
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Very interesting and fluid. Possibly the most experimental of your recent pieces, in terms of structure, vocabulary and text sizing. Nice work!
-Phil |
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Re: fingerprints & snowflakes
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by neverlosehope on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 09:12:41 AM AEST
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hiya
really interesting and nice read. i like this style of writing, its very effective. x |
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Re: fingerprints & snowflakes
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by Pidge on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 08:11:58 AM AEST
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| Very good poem. Love the abstract writing. :) |
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