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Save me
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 03:34:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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No one can be trusted,
They always want to break you,
Even when they truly care,
It's still something they'll do.
People don't know how to love,
All they do is hate,
They all want to spread unhappiness,
And that seems to be fate.
Sometimes they seem genuine,
You truly think they are,
But in a world of hidden agendas,
Genuine doesn't get far.
Maybe you'll be different,
We'll have to wait and see,
I really hope you prove me wrong,
I hope that you'll save me.
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-09-08 03:34:57]
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Re: Save me
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by bunit682 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 07:22:13 AM AEST
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| beautiful work of art, very deep |
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Re: Save me
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 12:14:16 PM AEST
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| A strong meaning and well put. Excellent! |
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Re: Save me
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by iiloveyouxx19 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 06:07:45 PM AEST
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| The meaning of this fits well in this piece. It's nice to show feeling through context even when it gets to the point as this does . Keep writing, it's magnificent. |
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Re: Save me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 04:46:47 PM AEST
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| very emotional and I love the way you worded it. |
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Re: Save me
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by voyage on
Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 03:05:01 PM AEST
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I hope it all works out for the best for you, and you will be happy. Just have a positive and optimistic outlook and it will turn out for the better in no time. Thank you for a great poem.
TG |
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Re: Save me
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by natizzle on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 09:10:30 PM AEST
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| love it :) the wording is amazing. x |
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Re: Save me
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by Hooligan785 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 04:27:20 AM AEST
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| Great poetry!! |
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