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help?
Contributed by
SilentMuse
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 02:53:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Every hand I grasp at
Becomes an empty space
All happy and willing
Then gone without a trace
I need more from life
Then false hope to get me through
I need someone to be there
And I thought it was you
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SilentMuse
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2010-09-08 02:53:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: help?
(User Rating: 1 ) by neverlosehope on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 03:20:10 AM AEST (User
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a really effective poem. very well written. stay strong tho and dont give up. hang in there x |
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Re: help?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChaosFactor on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 07:52:41 PM AEST (User
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It is love. Just take it. |
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