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The last Hurrah of Winter
Contributed by
Spike
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Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 02:44:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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a final flurry of powdered white
the last gusts of chill wind;
late frost and pale light
adieu good Winter and goodnight
huddled around the fire’s light
windows shut and curtains drawn;
clothing gathered close and tight
adieu good Winter and goodnight
the water stubborn in the pipes
shivering in tousled beds;
early fog and cold delight
adieu good Winter, and good night.
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Re: The last Hurrah of Winter
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 03:12:41 AM AEST
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Am I the only person in the world who likes winter? lol Winter seems to have about as many fans as rain. Having said that, I did like this poem, the last stanza especially.
-Phil |
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Re: The last Hurrah of Winter
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by Bexstasy on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 03:13:12 AM AEST
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| This is very good. :) |
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Re: The last Hurrah of Winter
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by ming on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 10:55:02 AM AEST
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I LOVE winter and this poem is good! But I must admit, fall is my favorite.
ming |
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Re: The last Hurrah of Winter
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 07:32:23 AM AEST
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| A wonderful description of this season. I love the seasons full stop, thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of verse. |
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Re: The last Hurrah of Winter
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by natizzle on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 04:37:59 AM AEST
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| i love love love it :) |
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Re: The last Hurrah of Winter
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by spud on
Tuesday, 5th October 2010 @ 12:52:54 PM AEST
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Hi,
Thought you were somewhat premature with
this one until I realised that you're in some part
of OZ where your winter is our summer ... and
vice versa.
As always - well constructed, nice flow, and
topically well chosen.
Tommy
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Re: The last Hurrah of Winter
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 02:22:59 PM AEST
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that photo is brilliant! i love winter to pieces,
love your poem!
hugs n' love nessa |
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