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My Gift to Everyone
Contributed by
polaris773
on
Monday, 6th September 2010 @ 05:07:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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What is it
I’m leaving
Behind.
The legacy my
ghost Is proud of.
The name taught
to children after
Poe and Washington.
My words quoted
when college students
need an ending
for their thesis.
The common
ground between two
strangers reading
the same book.
I hope I get a
Sandwich with my
Name on it.
Its to bad it Would
be filled With
lonliness and hoplessness
The diet that made me
who I am today
no one.
Copyright ©
polaris773
... [
2010-09-06 17:07:02]
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Re: My Gift to Everyone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 01:35:19 AM AEST
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Look into editing it would make this piece a bit better to be gifting out. Few words misspelled.  |
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Re: My Gift to Everyone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 04:41:47 AM AEST
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Agree with Tim, edit it and you're onto something good.
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