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Pain
Contributed by
Forevermasked
on
Monday, 6th September 2010 @ 03:24:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Such great pain and hatred
Masked behind these deceiving eyes
Buried underneath the lies
Forever misunderstood
Aged and captured within closed walls
Becomes a transformation
Into insignificant memories
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Re: Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by brialuv on
Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 10:26:54 AM AEST (User
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wow! nicely written..i can relate thanks for sharing |
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Re: Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by neverlosehope on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 03:17:44 AM AEST (User
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its really well written. very expressive. keep writing. x |
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