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I can paint a picture on a blank canvas
Contributed by
OnceAnAngel
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Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 11:25:34 PM in AEST
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Looking at you is like staring at the sea..
huge and unpredictable.
Your chaos, harmful as it can be,
yet a beauty when peaceful.
A Past you hold on to, pain you cant let go..
Untold yet shared, unsaid ..yet heard.
Touches, longing for love. and words that deny the truth
Enough to understand...
A song we might both know
unsung til we are one
yet, you choose to be alone
Even with the love bestowed
Blank canvas you may portray,
I see so much when i stare..
My words, may not be enough,
But realize i hold you dear.
I hold no key to free your soul..
But id surely try to get you there.
My way might not be like yours,
But hold me and youll know its there..
Please feel I care..
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OnceAnAngel
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2010-09-04 23:25:34]
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Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 11:05:05 AM AEST
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| This poem, is beautiful. I am in love with someone and I can really really relate to this . Thank you for such a lovely poem |
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Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 09:01:28 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 04:58:28 PM AEST
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| this is really beautiful. |
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Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST
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| :) |
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Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 10:37:42 PM AEST
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| Sweet |
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Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 02:51:45 PM AEST
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Filled with mixed emotions, love, confusion, hope, sorrow, desire and commitment. mmm I think its called living...
Nice write. |
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