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Hospital
Contributed by
SilentMuse
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Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 10:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rocking back and forth in the hospital room
The tock of the clock and my rocking in tune
Rocking and waiting I hear the clock chime
Such an dreadful face, my enemy is time
I rise from my chair to go walk the hall
I find it the most empty and saddest of all
each room I pass with a new wave of sorrow
I glimpse lives living on time merely borrowed
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2010-09-04 22:45:24]
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Re: Hospital
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by spud on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 08:36:07 AM AEST
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Hi,
Hospitals .... not exactly the most inspiring of places
yet it inspired you to write a nice piece of verse.
Well done.
Tommy
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Re: Hospital
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 02:54:08 PM AEST
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Nice write.
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Re: Hospital
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 09:02:56 PM AEST
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