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I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell
Contributed by
mvvenkataraman
on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 08:56:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Deep sorrow into my heart falls
World seems to be fully false
People doing black-mailing
True men miserably failing
All live with a cheating motive
And noble acts turning abortive
Our tears give all deep enjoyment
Our victories supply resentment
When we cry in deep pain
All rejoice having gain
When success we receive
A cunning plot all weave
Our progress is not cherished
Our hopes are demolished
None likes at all our being brave
Instead they want us to be slave
If we give a positive expression
All want us to suffer depression
If we exhibit our fine talent
Evil plots all try to invent
Our dejection if is displayed
If we are by demons preyed
This gives to all greatest ecstasy
Or else all seethe with jealousy
When we lose and suffer loss
All thank with joy God-boss
If we are driven toward agony
All feel life is funny and sunny
When we suffer maximum damage
All talk like a sagacious sage
When by fate we are kicked
All love our getting tricked
When we struggle to make a living
Further troubles all will be giving
This World is in fact a jungle
All view it from a bad angle
No one likes anyone's success
All show hatred in excess
World is gradually going to dogs
Venomously into brain each logs
Love, affection, mercy and kindness
Are totally removed with firmness
Best method is to believe in the unknown
And everything positive must be shown.
M V VENKATARAMAN
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mvvenkataraman
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Re: I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 11:26:23 AM AEST
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Very profound write. Every stanza has such deep meaning. I know where you are coming from on this. I Love the last stanza, I know now that nothing or no one can take away how much God loves us. I am working on focusing on the present , and finding things that make me happy. Thank you for such a amazing poem.
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Re: I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 09:05:09 PM AEST
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Re: I Firmly Tell, Earth Is Hell
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by Bexstasy on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 09:28:17 AM AEST
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| I really really enjoyed reading this! |
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