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Whispering our song.
Contributed by
Bexstasy
on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 02:49:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This is as numb as I will ever get,
I barely feel a thing when I think of how we met,
It's not that I don't want to heal,
It's more that I won't let myself feel.
This is as lost as I will ever be,
Nothing seems right without you and me,
All I can think about is how we were,
Streaming 'round my head until it's all a blur.
This is as low as I will ever sink,
Falling down until it's too hard to think,
I wish I was back where I belong,
In your arms, whispering our song.
This is as much as I will ever love,
Hoping that someday it will be enough,
Holding onto dreams that just won't come true,
Holding onto anything 'cause I'm in love with you.
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-09-03 14:49:57]
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Re: Whispering our song.
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 01:10:27 AM AEST
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| Well writen. A fine piece of flowing, rhyming poetry. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Whispering our song.
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by polaris773 on
Monday, 6th September 2010 @ 04:45:54 PM AEST
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| it has a solid flow and a good theme. |
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Re: Whispering our song.
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by CarrieLindeman on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 05:37:50 PM AEST
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| Really truely a great piece. |
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