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This is for you
Contributed by
Bexstasy
on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 02:17:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Let's give it up for you.
Round of applause for the things you put me through.
Standing ovation for all the tears you made stream out of my eyes.
Well done for getting away with all those lies.
Good job on the way you twisted me around your little finger.
Congratulations on making the pain linger.
Bravo on the way you loved to cheat.
How fantastic that every girls just a bit of meat.
Nice one on coming back when I'd finally moved on.
And great show, by the way, almost a shame you're gone.
Oh, and thank you for letting me know the truth.
Cheers for making me feel that I'm not good enough for you.
Thanks for ripping me up from the start.
And I appreciate you finally breaking my heart.
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-09-03 14:17:06]
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Re: This is for you
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by TryingMyLuck on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 12:36:48 AM AEST
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Really enjoyed this, the sarcasm wasn't over the top but worked to flesh out the pain.
Good work. |
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Re: This is for you
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by Song_of_Sarah on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 03:31:58 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this. It was nice that we got to see the progression of the relationship. It was kind of like reading a very sarcastic, very short story. |
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