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hollow wisdom
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 10:59:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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abandon me
water seeps
through
spread fingers
long departed
path ends
center
turns away.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-09-03 10:59:21]
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Re: hollow wisdom
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 11:15:45 AM AEST
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Probably the most cryptic of your recent poems I've read. The ending was probably the most interesting, brain-working part for me. Philosophical stuff.
-Phil |
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Re: hollow wisdom
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by polaris773 on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 02:53:02 PM AEST
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| for me it was my favorite from you so far. awsome |
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Re: hollow wisdom
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 01:15:17 AM AEST
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If this got any deeper we'd be digging coal!
A really brilliant piece of poetry. Well done. |
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