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Love's Scars
Contributed by
scottstone
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Thursday, 2nd September 2010 @ 01:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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did you love her when she laughed
did you hold her when she cried
did you tell her all your secrets
that you buried deep inside
do you remember when she kissed you
with lips of ruby red
So soft and yet she crushed you
you were so innocent back then
and you are innocent still now
she just simply left you broken
“ I just don’t love you anymore”
and the painful truth was spoken
did you love her when she left you?
she never held you while you cried
as she shared your every secret
the ones you buried deep inside
it was you alone who suffered
you cried a river of regret
they said the medicine would help you
that was the only help you’d get
and you’re stupid since you loved her
they all chimed in and said
you loved something that’s slutty
you’re crazy in the head
Im different from the rest though
You sing the same old song
Freak, nerd and weirdo
I knew I never could belong
You’ll never understand me
Or the music from my hands
All you do is laugh right at me
Truth told I never had a chance
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scottstone
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2010-09-02 13:03:58]
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Re: Love's Scars
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by tinybitinsane on
Thursday, 2nd September 2010 @ 07:55:49 PM AEST
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| i effin love this!!!!! |
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Re: Love's Scars
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by Bexstasy on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:15:30 AM AEST
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Oooft, I like this.
It's very effective. |
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Re: Love's Scars
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by DarkWolf on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 06:25:37 AM AEST
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A verry nice write.
Loved it |
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Re: Love's Scars
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 10:15:37 PM AEST
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| ahhhhhhhhhhh. its always the case eh. thats why fornication hurts. Its all about having a wife. people are decieved. if only we employed foresight more than hinesight in our lives |
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Re: Love's Scars
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 10:17:47 PM AEST
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| i like it more the more i read it. its something every sinful soul knows all too well. I've wrote about the same topic |
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Re: Love's Scars
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 06:04:31 AM AEST
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| Great poem! Strong words. I love it!!! |
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Re: Love's Scars
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 02:44:38 PM AEST
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| Wow loved it you do have a gift from God always use that keep writting. |
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