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truth lies in layers
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2010 @ 06:37:08 PM in AEST
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abstract
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a crown of vodka thorns
wound my forehead
damp bar napkins
torn up pieces
fitting
that much is lost
and found
a puzzle
too hard
to fit me
a drunk leers
riddles swirl
as melting ice
nudging
discarded straws
placement clearer
alone
unmolested
appropriate
drunken poetry
imperfections.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-09-01 18:37:08]
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Re: truth lies in layers
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by Spacey on
Thursday, 2nd September 2010 @ 04:31:42 AM AEST
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I really like the start of the poem. Great imagery.
It loses me in the middle. |
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Re: truth lies in layers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2010 @ 04:21:38 PM AEST
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Another fantastic quote to lead us into the poem. I think the beginning was the best bit, especially the first line.
-Phil |
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