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Words to my unborn
Contributed by
eastboyez
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Wednesday, 1st September 2010 @ 01:24:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Dear child, please forgive me, I did u wrong
I made a mistake, I know, I should have been strong
I was in love, my girl, your mother
But things went sour, all we did was suffer
She wanted more, more than I could ever offer
She wanted more, more than just your father
If I had the world I'd give it to her
But I don't have it, I don't own the planet dammit.
I was a boy, but I could have been a man
Worked my way through college, 3 shifts for a stand
A father with a fatherless past
Wished for his child, a life he never had
I hope you understand, understand why
Your father isn't a coward, he tried
Often I sit wishing for the sands of time
To go back, to save my soul, my child
Its kills me to watch people abandon their child
Ask me, I'd die, die to keep mine
I hope you are happy watching your father do the right thing now
I hope you can forgive me, forgive me somehow.
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eastboyez
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Re: Words to my unborn
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by tinybitinsane on
Wednesday, 1st September 2010 @ 03:08:42 AM AEST
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| i absolutly love this!! |
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Re: Words to my unborn
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by Bexstasy on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 07:30:57 AM AEST
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| Wow, so good! |
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Re: Words to my unborn
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 12:05:08 PM AEST
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| I can feel your sadness through your words. It was a very thoughtful write. |
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Re: Words to my unborn
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 05:22:32 AM AEST
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| This is so sad! Strong poem though! Very beautiful words! GREAT JOB!!! |
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Re: Words to my unborn
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by bleedinheart on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 08:18:20 AM AEST
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| very sad and emonional |
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Re: Words to my unborn
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by hungarianhaze on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 10:09:26 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written |
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