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Vacant Souls
Contributed by
shelby
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 08:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Old clocks strike the final hour,
hour of midnight and its final chord.
Embers in the fire die, slowly .
Old wood in floorboards creak,
wax on black candles drip.
Wind moans sullen through the trees
They come, drifting, floating like a dream.
Our final dance it seems, as the clouds cover the moon.
World growing dark as dark as we….
Welcome to our doom and gloom.
Beauty of our darkness sustains the longest hour.
Ghostly silhouettes free float.
Piano notes a bit off key.
This is the final moment, yes for you and for me
Dare not walk away, stare into the vacant soul’s.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2010-08-31 20:07:49]
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Re: Vacant Souls
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 07:35:44 PM AEST
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I stumbled across the old post just by accident. Maybe that was meant to happen. Don't know but it sure is pretty while also a bit sullen. Can't believe it doesn't have more comments...actually I do belive it but I'll stop there because I have a lot of strong opinions on how great poems get pushed off the front page so soon by the posting ******!
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Re: Vacant Souls
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 09:47:22 PM AEST
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Good work girlfriend.
Very thought provoking.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Vacant Souls
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 09:05:40 PM AEST
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| such a vivid picture you have painted with your words...you seem to always find the right words to use in your poetry and they go well together.... |
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Re: Vacant Souls
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by duff on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 09:50:02 PM AEST
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I like the mystique that surrounds this piece. It's eerie and creates a stirring mood. Wonderful imagery and another intelligent piece of writing. Well done.
take care
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Re: Vacant Souls
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by FireStarter on
Wednesday, 16th December 2015 @ 04:20:17 PM AEST
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| Very good :) |
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