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A Different Kind Of Hurt
Contributed by
Beautifully-Imperfect
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Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 10:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The issues I have make me suffer from an illness inside my body
Sadly this condition is understood by nobody
I've been told time and time again they understand me
So why does my mind and body tell me they're all lying?
My emotions and my mind take every situation and jump the gun
I feel there's no light within me, where's the sun?
I seek for positivity where ever I go but my mind keeps saying no
I'm tired of "dealing" with what I have instead of having it leave.
I want friends, I want laughter, I want positivity, I want happiness why does it seem impossible for me to find?
Am I not supposed to have mine?
Just please what ever you are get out and be gone, please just go....
I'm tired, tired of feeling alone.
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Re: A Different Kind Of Hurt
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 12:22:41 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem. You capture how you feel very well but I hope it's not really as bad as it sounds. |
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Re: A Different Kind Of Hurt
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 02:33:49 AM AEST
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This is a serious piece of writing that leaves the reader with deep feelings for your hurt.
You express yourself perfectly. well done. |
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