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trapped in a predicament
Contributed by
tinybitinsane
on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 09:29:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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You kiss my lips and i all i give u is a small smile, you're not on my mind. You
move down to my neck, kiss me softly. I close my eyes, a tear excapes and slowly
goes down my cheek. My body's here and my mind's on him. I try push u away, u
pull me into a tight hug. My lips tremble but u kiss them still. I cant bear to
look at u, to have u here touching me, to let u touch me. I want to scream! I
die slowly in ur arms. Tears are coming out freely now but u still reach for my
hand. Forcing me to stay when all i want is to go. I dont know how i've
forgotten my voice but i cant bring myself to call out for help. It feels like
there's a thousand eyes on us, witnessing my weak heart. I turn my head to see
him looking at me with disgust. I shut my eyes tightly, i open them and he's
gone. Above us vultures cirlce waiting patiently. You move down to my stomach.
Im suddenly disgusted at myself, i feeling like im going to be sick. I push u
off me and quickly run to the door. From the corner of my eye i see u get up and
walk towards me. I cant open the door, its locked...
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2010-08-30 21:29:48]
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Re: trapped in a predicament
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by Daniellemarie on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 09:43:51 PM AEST
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this is an interesting poem it's as if he has trapped you well done
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Re: trapped in a predicament
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 02:27:51 AM AEST
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| well this is a truely marverlous piece. Your descriptive exellence makes this flow, well writen, well done. |
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Re: trapped in a predicament
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by brialuv on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 03:42:26 PM AEST
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| amazingly written i love poems that tell a story ! |
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