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Do you Know
Contributed by
irisblue
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Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 06:44:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Do you know that when I am with you I am in the present moment and aware
of how you make my heart melt when you whisper how much you care?
Every breath I exhale has your name lingering in the air
The moon, the stars, the cliffs, and hills are one when engaged by your hypnotic stare.
Your hands so strong , and rugged, at times they hold me their captive helpless yearning and
longing for more. Then at times our fingers intertwine,, I am at peace and set free.
God painted us that sunset, and hung the moon and stars above, to show the darkness is
over, now give or receive true LOVE.
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2010-08-30 18:44:10]
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Re: Do you Know
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by Avataar on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 08:13:38 AM AEST
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| Nice write...love is everywhere...we need to yearn for it and we will see it |
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Re: Do you Know
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 03:18:34 PM AEST
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This has some great classic stuff in and nice images that makes one wish to sigh.
*sigh* lol 
Thanks for posting,
Tim
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Re: Do you Know
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by Maygee on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 11:51:23 AM AEST
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| Very well written. There's a good bit of imagery in it and I really like the descriptiveness that used for your feelings :) |
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Re: Do you Know
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by Datimeisme on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 08:08:29 PM AEST
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| That was so beautiful, It nearly brought tears to my eye's, I have that warm fuzzy feeling in my stomach right now like when you first meet that special person,I love this poem,I only hope one day I feel what you wrote. :..).. |
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Re: Do you Know
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 01:57:22 AM AEST
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| I wish I could once again know the feeling of happiness to the point of feeling like beautiful things such as the sunset itself, were handmade for me. The imagery of that, a painted sunset, water colors and brushstrokes along the sky, as you sit beside your lover and hold each other, and soak it in. :) |
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Re: Do you Know
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 11:44:18 AM AEST
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"God painted us that sunset, and hung the moon and stars above.."
What a truly perfect line....reminds me of Rumi. (That's high praise there, Irisbluie...Google him if you haven't heard of him...he's your cup of tea).
All these poems of love and passion...I hope it's one guy to have the gift of knowing you. If not, then there is one lucky mofo out there and he doesn't even know what's coming down the pike!
Well done, well done.
Invierno |
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Re: Do you Know
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 2nd August 2020 @ 12:19:53 AM AEST
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Beautiful and dreamy...
The visuals were stunning.
We miss u......
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