|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
the demons
Contributed by
anonomys
on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 06:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
|
The demons tell me what to do They tell me what to say They tell me how to say it They tell me how to act They are always putting me down When I’m up they tear me down They push me too far They make me do bad things They make me hate myself They are all around me They can’t be stopped They will never quit They will never care for anyone else They’ve killed so many people They teased people And the demons are everyone around me they are the people at school the people at home and some of the demons are in my mind in my thoughts and they’re killing me and they will never stop until the day I die
Copyright ©
anonomys
... [
2010-08-30 18:00:57] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: the demons
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 08:27:18 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Dear respected anonomys,
Your poem is highly meaningful
As it is forcing me to be thoughtful
It is plainly telling only the truth
The facts it says are mammoth
I am sure it is a wonderful write
Written with deep foresight
In my life I experience it
It is surely a fine poetic bit.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN |
|
|
|