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You Did Ask
Contributed by
DJThokiaE
on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 09:51:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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His words are as sharp as razors.
Do you like to feel them across your neck ?
I'm telling you darling, in the long run,
Those razors will turn into regret.
Your drunk off his lies,
and when he grabs you by the waist,
Your transformed into nothing but dust,
You're not the first, to be easily replaced.
I told you, we all told you.
You chose the hard way out.
You will come to a running stop,
once he finds a new girl, no doubt.
Tear after tear,
lie after lie.
How long til you believe,
he doesn't care if you cry.
He's defending himself,
"The rumors aren't true."
He's in it for the one man race,
You haven't got a clue.
He's in it to get his rocks off,
Yeah whose the next booty call ?
He'll whisper words so sweet,
And you're ready to fall.
He'll never take the blame,
and you've become his pet.
Not his girlfriend, not his lover,
but you'll do anything to protect.
The only thing you're doing,
is digging your grave.
I don't feel sorry for you now.
I've nothing left to say.
So when he takes that blade and
Stabs it in your ribcage, a little to the left..
Remember i was once your friend,
you found too easy to forget.
When your heart is on the floor
and he stomps on it just a little more.
He'll be the hero,
and you'll be the whore.
You will not see because he is shining.
You won't listen because you're right.
And when all else falls,
who will come crawling back in the night ?
Like a time bomb ticking away, like a heart waiting on edge.
Like putting keys into ignition.
I only tried to be a friend
and you didn't listen ...
E.J.Morris,
J.L.Morris - Masterminds of Poetry.
2010/06/30
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Re: You Did Ask
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by DayLilly on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 10:20:49 PM AEST
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| awesome:) |
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Re: You Did Ask
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by tinybitinsane on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 12:04:13 PM AEST
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| this is a great write! i loved it keep it up |
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Re: You Did Ask
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by FragileStrength on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 01:21:34 PM AEST
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| This was great! |
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Re: You Did Ask
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 12:33:59 AM AEST
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| Excellent write. You gave this girl a warning but clearly she didn't want to listen. Well described. |
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Re: You Did Ask
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by Avataar on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 09:42:47 AM AEST
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| Very well written...sad some people only learn the hard way |
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