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Why can't you love me?
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I thought about you quite a few nights
I never knew you'd make me feel so right
I don't want to pressure you, or scare you away
But I think about you each and everyday
To me your so addicting
To you that must be sickening
I know you want nothing more than a kiss
But after you leave, your all that I miss
You touched my face so tender
When your here my hearts in a splendor
But why? I never felt like this, especially from one touch, one kiss
You see these are the opportunities I miss
It's never the right time, never the right place
But, I think things would be different in this case
I promise to never hurt you, and I promise to never lie
Because everything you do and everything you say
I think is wonderful and beautiful in every way
Your so honest, and caring
I wish you were up for sharing
I understand all the things going on
But is that all are we done?
I think you should open your mind and let your heart lead the way
It will tell you the right things to say
Maybe it works and maybe it doesn't but in the end I'll prove to you I am everything everyone else wasn't
You'll never know, you'll never give it a chance
You can just walk away without a second glance
Because you've been burned
But not by me
The best thing is right in front of you
Can't you see?
But I guess I'll take what I can get
Because honestly and truly your the greatest man I've ever met.
TAJ
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2003-04-18 18:05:00]
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by sodapopsuicide on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:30:18 PM AEST
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| beautiful.. :D |
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by Metalmouth666 on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 11:30:56 PM AEST
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| Very, Very...wow!!! honestly very touching and from the heart, I do hope things will work out for you in the end. Great Write ~MetalMouth |
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by lovesucks on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:50:38 PM AEST
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| thank you so much for your input very much appreciated. It will I think :) |
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by Sara on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:06:32 PM AEST
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Touching, emotion write. I enjoyed very much!
<3 Sara |
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:28:49 PM AEST
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| nice poem, i hope it works out for you |
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by Trisha on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 11:53:37 PM AEST
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| hi |
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:13:52 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem!!! I loved it from beginning to end. Keep up the good work!! :) |
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Re: Why can't you love me?
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:58:16 PM AEST
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Totally Awesome! I wish that one day i can find a man that feel this way about. Keep righting your great!
~Amy |
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