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A Wish
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For all the wrongs that I made right
I still don't see an end in sight
I wish for me some happy times
For lots of love and no good-byes
I want my kids safe and secure
This pain and sadness too much to endure
I've made so many mistakes
I'll never see a wedding cake
So sad, but true
These things I can't undo
If I could
I don't know if I would
For I would not be, the person that you see
On the outside tall and strong
On the inside sad and torn
To nobody do I remove this shell
For that would release nothing but hell
I've loved and lost
It's me who pays the cost
I don't know if things will change
But being alone feels so strange
I fear of not being loved
Please God bring me a blessing from above.
My knight in shining armor
A good man, a good father
Someone new to show me the way
Someone who knows all the right things to say
In time I know, that's what I've been told
But; by time that happens my heart will have closed the doors
To nobody will love ensure
TAJ
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2003-04-18 17:35:00]
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Re: A Wish
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 06:01:52 PM AEST
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Beautifully written....terribly sad tho... I hope you find the happiness you crave for yourself and your kids...
Jenni |
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Re: A Wish
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 06:13:34 PM AEST
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lovely poem. Full of many emotions. You will find that special person. He will come when you aren't even expecting it, happiness to you.
Michelle |
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Re: A Wish
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by S_K_Williamson on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 08:28:17 PM AEST
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Beautifuly done...such a sad piece though. I hope you get what you seek. It all begins inside of you.
Great write,
Sharon;) |
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Re: A Wish
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by Sara on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM AEST
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beautiful, simply magnificant!!! I love it. I wish you all the best!
Best,
Sara |
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Re: A Wish
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by lovesucks on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:48:02 PM AEST
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| thank you so much for your input. Rather new at posting my work so thanks for your support |
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