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The Marine I miss
Contributed by
SemperFiAllTheTime
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Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 11:24:26 PM in AEST
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I wish one day you would just say I'm perfect
Or tell me I make all your dreams come true
Your the best thing that has ever happened to me
I will always be missing you
Your deployments are always hard
I hope you never stay longer
I'll wait for your every letter
Cause' the distance between us will only make us stronger
Half my heart will always go where you go
As long as you always take it
I know your very smart
And will never try to break it
I hope you know how much you mean to me
I will always be the one to try
My life with you will always have one rule
And that is to be Semper Fi.
I miss you and come home to me soon!
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Re: The Marine I miss
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 01:00:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful and he's fortunate to have you rooting for him. Many solders don't have that.
Great writing. I pray you both have your dreams come true together.
Blessings,
emy
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Re: The Marine I miss
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 04:33:32 AM AEST
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sweet, sincere and straight from the heart into words outlining true emotion, i'm sure the person u wrote it 4 wud agree.
Daylynn
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Re: The Marine I miss
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by terryodogbref on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 06:53:02 AM AEST
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| Im also a marine and if I was deployed at the moment and someone had wrote this poem to me it would make my month, its knowing loved ones are thinking of you that makes doing a difficult job bearable. |
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