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my sister from another mister
Contributed by
xbabycyutie
on
Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 10:09:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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since the very beginning we've always been cool
weird how it is cause i tried to fit in even if i looked like a fool
but after you, being a part of a crowd wasnt important anymore
with you i found out who i was & it wasnt the person who i was before
im writing this to tell you how much i cherish this friendship
and i also want to tell u that we're like magnets that'll never drift
i wish i didnt have to be so far away
i wish i can turn back time and relive yesterday
yesterday when we stood side by side
moments when i had to stay strong while u cry
and if i was the one who was weak
you'll always try to cheer me up even if it means for you to act like a freak
i miss the mornings when i'd get a text saying "hey i might not go to school today"
and then ill almost be down on my knees begging u to please come and stay
our lunches wasnt really that big of a deal
it was always me catching up with other friends while u do your own thing
i want to say thank you for everything
and till the day i see u again, my smile will be waiting
theres one other thing id like so say
that even if people think your a bad influence, I Just Don't Care!
they dont know you the way i do
and who is anyone to even judge you
i know its hard to be apart
but like i always tell you, my sister, you'll always be in my heart
so even if we have big blow out fights
you&i both know it only takes a single joke to make it right
im truely proud to say
that i have a sister like u at the end of the day (:
i love you sista from anotha mista!
u mah bestfriend foreva!<3
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Re: my sister from another mister
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by weirdiscool on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 09:49:32 AM AEST
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i think for a person to be able to just..write how they feel, put it out there..and make it makeee sense. that's talent. i don't have that talent. BUT YOU DO.
everybody starts somewhere. work your way up. and take all the constructive criticism you can possibly get.
obviously, this was meant for your best friend. and i'm just about pretty sure she thinks it's amazing. i certainly do.
..yuh(: |
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