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Crumbling Leaf
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 08:34:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A brownish-orange leaf crumbles into pieces;
once vibrant sun glowed through it like stained glass.
Now its fragility evokes feelings of death.
Fall's chilly breath sucked this leaf's life-blood;
a vampire of the season consumes leaves' lives.
A tear flows down my cheek and falls upon this victim.
Soon the leaf will crumble into nothing.
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lesoleilnoire
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2010-08-28 20:34:27]
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Re: Crumbling Leaf
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 07:01:11 PM AEST
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'Tis the circle of life my dear, the circle of life. An interesting take.  |
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Re: Crumbling Leaf
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 02:12:08 AM AEST
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| A fantastic write! I love nature in all her forms and this poem is a perfect expression of the changing seasons, thanks for sharing, I loved reading this. |
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Re: Crumbling Leaf
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by mehuel on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 10:54:30 AM AEST
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| the essence of change and what it entails has been captured beautifully... |
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Re: Crumbling Leaf
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by irisblue on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 07:47:14 PM AEST
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I love this , beautiful
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