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My Diary
Contributed by
Evanescencefreak
on
Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 01:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I'm fighting for control
and every time I lose
have a flick through my diary
its pages you may peruse
But my diary it is different
and very strange indeed
for most when they write a diary
they do not often bleed
My diary's not written on paper
you'll find it in no bin
I carry it with me always
I carry it on my skin
For every little sorrow
every day in hell
I cut my own skin open
and the drops of blood they fell
Count up my misfortunes
count up every one
and present them to the court of justice
when judgment day shall come
And let's see if the punish
all those who let me be
who didn't take the time to notice
what the world was doing to me
Who walked by me
almost every single day
and didn't bother asking
will you be okay
But it doesn't matter anyway
for even if they did
I'd say oh yes I'm fine indeed
don't worry please I'd bid
But as they walked away I'd whisper
I lied oh please do stop
I'm not okay, I never am
but query they did not
My life is gone it's too late for me
but other need your help
don't walk away I beg of you
don't lose the regret you felt
Copyright ©
Evanescencefreak
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2010-08-28 13:29:44]
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Re: My Diary
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by autumnlady on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 06:34:14 AM AEST
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| That was painful... Take care. |
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Re: My Diary
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by weeme on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 02:08:37 AM AEST
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i love the way you have written this and the rhyming was great. . hope if you did feel like this its better for you now
take care
from someone that always asks :) |
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Re: My Diary
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by cri8bat on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 10:32:18 AM AEST
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that was painfully awsome!
I really like it |
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Re: My Diary
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by emphaticplacebo on
Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 05:46:36 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, and I agree that we all have a journal or diary with us always, some more descriptive and detailed than others. You have a great talent for imagery! Good job! |
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