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Forever There
Contributed by
Guyjular
on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 11:09:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Attraction developed a friendship.
Friendship grew romantic emotion.
Feelings flourish whenever you are near,
Heart pounds to near explosion.
Tender is your heart,
Within it lies my oasis.
Every second without your warmth,
My heart yurns for your kiss
Your eyes stare deep into mine,
Through your lips those words flow
Within my longest moment in life,
Emotions run rampant like a tornado.
A simple hug of only a short time,
Seemed to extend for hours.
As our emotions coinside,
This indestructible feeling empowers.
This path we have decided to take,
On this journey for our souls repair.
Only this one thing I can promise,
That I will always be forever there.
Copyright ©
Guyjular
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2010-08-27 23:09:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forever There
(User Rating: 1 ) by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 06:12:01 AM AEST (User
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I found myself nodding in approval. Excellent write. |
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Re: Forever There
(User Rating: 1 ) by ammar on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 07:54:46 AM AEST (User
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Honestly, this is a wonderful poem. It is simple and straightforward, and it rhymes really well.
Peace
Ammar |
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Re: Forever There
(User Rating: 1 ) by SemperFiAllTheTime on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 10:02:25 AM AEST (User
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This poem made me cry, it makes me think of my marine that is deployed in japan right now. It's such a great poem thank you for your incredible talent at writing this poem :) |
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