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The Weed
Contributed by
Ali
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Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Was it Planted?
Or had it been,
In the soil from the start?
The tears I cry,
water it,
The feelings I cannot feel,
feed it.
The weed grows,
Breaking me on the inside,
So no one will see,
Untill it is so big,
That it could break through my skin.
So big it becomes me.
Right now it is so strong,
The pressure pushing out,
That sometimes I cut myself,
To let something out and give relief.
But the weed will still grow.
Copyright ©
Ali
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2003-04-18 16:35:00]
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Re: The Weed
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by S_K_Williamson on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:38:02 PM AEST
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This breaks my heart...I am so sad that you feel this way. If you ever need to talk I will talk with you.
Great write on a sad situation.
Sharon;) |
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Re: The Weed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 05:07:53 PM AEST
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Welcome to your-poetry.com. This is so sad...
Hope you're ok..
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Re: The Weed
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 06:17:45 PM AEST
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ahhh this is heartbreaking to me. Im sorry you feel so bad. I'm here for you.Shoot me a message if needed.concretecowgirl32@hotmail.com
Hugs and love
Michelle |
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Re: The Weed
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by Saira on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 01:18:25 PM AEST
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I'm deeply moved by this amazing write. Can feel the pain so deep in my bones. Wonderful job! Thanks for sharing it.
Saira |
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