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The Rider vs. Me
Contributed by
elisabeth
on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 04:20:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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O Warden, why have you forgotten the innocence of youth?
A place of milk and honey, where beauty is delightful and love heals all
Caught red-handed by naivete
Narcissism rapes
I am imprisoned by my warden, o me
In the deep of night, her mind is tortured
Of regret, mistakes, and unfulfilled longings
O Me, why have remembered a youthful angel?
Who bestowed you with a little potassium - was enough energy to get through the mire
Haunted by pleasant conversations
Everlasting vanity
I am imprisoned by my warden, o me
In the deep of night, her mind recalls simplicity
Of the swollen lips of an affectionate Muse's kiss
O Angel of Desire, may I plead my depression before you?
Time and back again and again is calling me to live by rules and regulation
As I dance to the off-beat
Drum of love arouses
I am imprisoned by my warden, o me
In the deep of night, her mind races
Of two bodies stepping to a passionate rhythm
O Prince, is that tainted odd beauty the one you will engage?
The pleasure of bliss's wedding shall not be wishful thinking
Virgin denied for
Savoring indulgence
I am imprisoned by my warden, o me
In the deep of night, her mind regrets
Forsaken dreams of captivating Mt. Kuth
O Knight, will you return to someone you once loved?
The pain and sorrow, life has malevolently surrounded us with
Defeated in battles
But the war still beckons
I am imprisoned by my warden, o me
In the deep of night, her mind cries out,
"O prince come back and rescue me with your soothing embrace."
O Rider, why have you delayed to engage in war?
I court you with the scent of pleasure that helps to pass the time
Entangled in love/hate
Enraptured heart is awakened
I am imprisoned by my warden who is me
In the deep of night, her mind is sure
Of victory and peace of mind, my love -
I give you all
If you come for me.
Copyright ©
elisabeth
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2010-08-24 16:20:35]
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Re: The Rider vs. Me
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 08:31:33 PM AEST
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I have to be honest Elizabeth....i don't understand most of what you write about as it is wayyyy too in-depth for me, but i do love the passion and your use of such descriptive and emotive terminology.
Prose is not my forte' .....but that being said, i liked what i read. |
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Re: The Rider vs. Me
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 12:18:13 PM AEST
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A powerful compelling passage
I tried to stop reading
but by the end I realized I could'nt
The depth derived is incredible
your style is unique in that there is so much going on
a masterful write
-UNORTHODOX |
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