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broken glass
Contributed by
ming
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Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 09:33:37 AM in AEST
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inventing reflection
shuffled and reshaped
furthest past
resides present
mirrors and papercuts
right hand a shadow
tears collected
blue as ink
tracks of shatter
broken glass.
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ming
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2010-08-24 09:33:37]
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Re: broken glass
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 09:52:39 AM AEST
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| This is a well composed piece. I enjoyed reading it very much. Well done. |
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Re: broken glass
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by polaris773 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 01:53:03 PM AEST
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| I like your work and quote in the begining |
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Re: broken glass
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 01:57:02 PM AEST
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I love it!
And the quote is so true... |
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Re: broken glass
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 07:32:27 AM AEST
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Gotta love German philosophers, they have this uncanny ability of finding the truth in life. This was a very interesting poem, very different from the usual stuff we read on here. I especially liked this bit:
'tears collected
blue as ink'
-Phil
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Re: broken glass
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by DayLilly on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 11:30:01 PM AEST
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amazing. short and really gets you thinking..
great job |
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