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Is this Love?
Contributed by
mila
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Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 02:17:18 AM in AEST
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Who said I shouldn’t fall for you? Who said it’s wrong to be with you?
I’ve been hypnotized by your eyes. I’ve been charmed with your words. I crave for your touch. I feel a need of your kisses.
Why do I always smile just thinking of you? Why do I miss you so much when you’re not with me?
I feel so happy and alive when I’m with you. When we are together nothing seems to matter. You give me an amazing feeling every time I’m with you. You make me want you more and more each time.
How do I stop my feelings for you? How do I stop wanting to be with you everyday?
Every time I see you the more strongly I feel. Every time you touch me I want simply more. Each day I feel a need to just hear your voice. Each day I helplessly dream to be in your arms.
With such deep feelings for you, have I fallen in love with you?
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Re: Is this Love?
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by mvvenkataraman on
Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 09:18:24 AM AEST
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Dear respected mila,
Your poetry is extremely superb
It acts like a mind curing herb
Love's beauty is well told
Every word is a pure gold
Without giving any confusion
You have given expression
Every word of it I greatly relished
A true lover is never anguished
When I think of your poetry
My soul feels totally free
How wonderfully you have coined!
In support of love I have also joined
Please accept my honest best wishes
Tears and fears your poem banishes.
Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN
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Re: Is this Love?
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by UNORTHODOX on
Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 02:53:56 PM AEST
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Yes what is love
emotions can be easly triggered so it's hard to say
either way this was a passage that once you start reading you can't stop
the bound of being able to relate is ever prevalent
Nice form
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Re: Is this Love?
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by Brasco on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 12:38:36 AM AEST
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| well done Mila! |
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