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good-bye promise
Contributed by
tinybitinsane
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Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 04:58:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Im staring at this blank page, trying to write a solomn goodbye. But nothing
comes to mind. I look at you, beyond you, sleeping so sweetly, my heart skips a
beat when i realize what im about to do.
I let my heart's feelings flow to my
right hand. It isnt a goodbye, its a promise i promised to keep. Before i said i'd
be yours, u asked me if whenever i'd fall outta love or something like that,
that i'd let u know and we could still be friends. But the thing is, i dont
believe we could go on because i dont think i had ever loved you. I lied and
cried and fell and stood in ur face pretending to b urs, i couldnt help but play
along. I care for you enough to stop this silly dance and walk away because i
know you wouldnt.
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tinybitinsane
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2010-08-22 16:58:51]
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Re: good-bye promise
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by kadie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 07:53:06 PM AEST
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i really liked this .
real good
keep writing |
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Re: good-bye promise
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 09:36:17 PM AEST
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At least you had the will to do whats right
most of us don't.
good release
well done. |
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Re: good-bye promise
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by DayLilly on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 11:42:07 PM AEST
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almost made me cry. to be honest.
but it was good:) |
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Re: good-bye promise
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by TheWildBeliever on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:34:23 AM AEST
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| very nice. alot of emotion to it. i like it :) |
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