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Contributed by
slogger0147
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Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 04:54:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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today seemed oh so different,not in the usual cold november,the fields the tree the falling leaves,where not as i remember,and today the birds flew silently,across the shadowed plain,and all the thoughts that haunted me,went rushing through my brain,so i d rest against a willow tree,to ease my weiry mind,for i cant go back i cant return,to the life i left behind,and in all of my confusion,i drifted in a dream,and when i woke i could not believe, the sight that i had seen,for the piercing eyes of reality,looked me up and down so strange,and it was then i finally realised, it was time i had to change
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Re: change
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by polaris773 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 05:56:38 PM AEST
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| i have to say i liked it but i think it can be edited. |
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Re: change
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 09:38:12 PM AEST
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There's something about this flow
that holds me. |
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