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Running Blind
Contributed by
beatnikpunk
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Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 12:59:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Unplugged myself from consensus reality
Fallacy! hiding things we’re taught not to see
Paranoid awareness – My chosen sight
I believe in nothing – I don’t try to align
Pursuit for knowledge in pursuit to be free
But the things I find are too black for you to see
Will we open up? – Or will we choose to deny?
Foundational lies – Let them all subside
My “reality” crumbles to fluidity
Then to the surface there floats a clarity
But will we step up? – Or just continue the plight?
Will we learn from mistakes? – Or continue to fight?
Still the maze spirals like an old gum tree
As I search without, and on inwardly
The schism, the abyss, could we learn to fly?
Or might it all topple down… before we even try…
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Re: Running Blind
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by Daniellemarie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 12:38:42 PM AEST
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nice poem
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Re: Running Blind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 04:02:07 PM AEST
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You've got something. Just improve the flow of your poetry and you'll be fine.
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Re: Running Blind
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 05:08:30 PM AEST
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