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the happiness well
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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once upon a time
there was the happiness well
where all of the love in the world
did happily dwell,
then along came a peasant
who threw down in the well
some magic powder
in the well it did dwell,
alas the powder of magic
brought many to see
and they climbed in the well
they could not let it be,
if they fell off their ropes
they fell down into the well
and had many tales of love
to later share and to tell,
until the magic powder was all
taken away, one day all gone
the happiness love well dried up
so now the well tale's justa song:
"once upon a time
there was the happiness well
where all of the love in the world
did happily dwell..."
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2003-04-18 10:05:00]
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Re: the happiness well
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:24:22 AM AEST
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too bad the well dried up
good write
Shari |
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Re: the happiness well
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 11:57:13 AM AEST
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pretty write. Well you have the magic with your pen in your poetry so fill the well of love back up with all its loving water and share a sip with aeveryone.
I loved this poem!!
Michelle
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Re: the happiness well
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 03:25:34 PM AEST
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Ness....this is adorable!!! I LOVE IT!! And I'm sure my kids at school will if you give me permission to share it with them when school reopens.... May I?? May I?? Pleeeze...
Hugs always
Jenni |
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Re: the happiness well
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:44:11 PM AEST
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Very cute... hehe if they fell wouldn't they die though? Haven't read a poem by you in a while was a pleasure to see this one.
Very poignantly written keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: the happiness well
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by S_K_Williamson on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 05:35:06 PM AEST
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Nessa,
I am sure wherever you are
wherever you might dwell
there is love and happiness
that springs from your eternal well
you are one of the most loving and caring people I have the honor to know.
great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: the happiness well
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 09:54:56 PM AEST
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I liked this read as I read it two times!
Great peice,thanks for the happiness sharing! Christina |
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Re: the happiness well
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:08:29 AM AEST
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of course you may may ! with my blessings !
big woofie hugs, n' love, always nessa |
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Re: the happiness well
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:33:19 AM AEST
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| Awww! my dearLady ,whence did you get this magic well,, full of love tales.. I think it is in your heart.. so sweet .. hugs n love always .. venkat |
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Re: the happiness well
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:03:10 AM AEST
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| Magic!!! |
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Re: the happiness well
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by nikkie on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:00:13 AM AEST
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| WOW! i like this poem. Its so cute! U must have magic urself to write sumthing so cute Nice & cute write! ~*~Nikkie~*~ |
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Re: the happiness well
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:32:54 PM AEST
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| OMG how sweet and magic is this poem of yours, i love this poetic legends. you really awakened my imagination, thank you. |
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Re: the happiness well
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 07:57:04 AM AEST
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| i LOVE this poem... what a precious write... with several emotions... just like an old fairy tale... blessings... |
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Re: the happiness well
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 10:09:41 PM AEST
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| Very cleverly written. I like it. MB |
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