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Tempt Of Fate?
Contributed by
Guyjular
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Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:57:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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After what needed to be done, was.
Part of me was still in the car with you.
My heart, my soul, left as u drove away.
I've never felt this way that I do.
Sitting here with this in front me.
And the glass staring at my tempt of fate.
Is she really what it took to make me crumble?
It might already be too late.
My mind feels like it's already been made up.
Everyone else is doing it, why not I?
This substance that sits and stares,
Taunts me every time I look it in the eye.
Why does this feel like this is the only option?
Why is she the one that makes me think like this?
Why did you leave me here, when you didn't want to?
Will this substance really give me that fake bliss?
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Guyjular
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2010-08-20 14:57:07]
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Re: Tempt Of Fate?
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by Daniellemarie on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:31:39 PM AEST
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slick little poem and may I ask what this substance is?.....mysterious
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Re: Tempt Of Fate?
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by Zeberdee on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:39:39 PM AEST
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| I found it somewhat boring to be honest. |
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Re: Tempt Of Fate?
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 21st August 2010 @ 06:04:13 PM AEST
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| This makes me think of an alcoholic choosing booze over his lover, and the lover, in turn, leaving for the last time. This piece seems like it spilled out in the moment, capturing all the what ifs after a fallout. |
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