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A tear falls
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:16:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit I sigh
I watch detached
looking in
from
the outside.
Illuminating
the darkness
is the moon so bright
as I wonder
what I should do with my life.
Only feelings of doom
flow
in my empty room
emotionally I'm so hollow
don't know what to do,
every time
I let someone inside
they cut me deep
I bleed
and escape to the shadows to hide.
Illuminated by the moon
in the mirror
is a face
I don't know who it is
and
my heart slowly breaks,
all the confusions and Illusions
make me tremble and sigh
A tear falls
as I start to cry.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2010-08-20 14:16:11]
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Re: A tear falls
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by Rasberry on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 08:46:33 PM AEST
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| Women complain about men hurting them and making them cry but we .. Sumtyms i do it ..do the exact same if not worse.nice poem. |
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Re: A tear falls
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by emystar on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 09:37:02 PM AEST
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Now u 'bout got me crying.
Good writing even tho it's so sad.
You can cry on my shoulder.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: A tear falls
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 21st August 2010 @ 05:48:21 AM AEST
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| This is a really super poem. You write with great sensitivity. Well done. |
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Re: A tear falls
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by brialuv on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 11:28:17 AM AEST
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| sad yet a compelling write..nice job* |
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Re: A tear falls
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 04:19:30 PM AEST
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I can empathize with this. Nicely written, with great fluency.
-Phil |
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