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Miles
Contributed by
Guyjular
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Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 10:27:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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No distance will ever be too far,
for the one I want to hold forever.
I don't want to imagine life without,
you beside me through life's endeavor.
All other women are meaningless,
our distance is my only crippling factor.
Those women are only in the interim,
untill we can live happily ever after.
The many miles that are between us,
seem as though they are only a few.
How quickly i wish they will pass,
the journey to your heart I will pursue.
This hole in my life is growing,
only you can fill my souls void.
The thought, you not feeling the same,
entangles me in the state, paranoid.
Phone calls can never replace,
the feeling of warmth from your soul.
Waiting for the day we are together,
My heart you have already stole.
Copyright ©
Guyjular
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2010-08-20 10:27:32]
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Re: Miles
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by chrisdavid on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 11:51:00 AM AEST
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I'm not too sure that long distance relationships work. A poem written well.
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Re: Miles
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 12:03:04 PM AEST
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In some places, it didn't flow too well for me.
But I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem! It's as if you took my entire situation that I've been living for years, and put it into these simple words. I understand, completely, where you're coming from.
Just know one day you'll get the girl. Be patient. :)
Love,
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