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Deep Disruption.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:12:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The tender touch of a velvet moon
Soothes a sky primed and ignited by darkness.
The valley bottom stirs,
The trees and hedgerows waking from dreams
Stumble in to the light of the moon,
And the sheep too are suprised, their bleating
A unified cry of peril.
And somewhere far away, another time, another place,
The stars are feverish in their haste to escape
A dark premonition that twists and turns,
Shackling the sky in the chains of a deep disruption.
A shower of sparks dance across the moon,
The sea of tranquility errupts, the valley ablaze with shadows
That retrace their footsteps across continents,
Across landscapes cratered by falling stars.
The air is alive and crackling with disruption.
A deep disruption that will bring to an end
Man's pursuit of the earth's demise.
Copyright ©
cashfan1
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2010-08-20 07:12:24]
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Re: Deep Disruption.
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by DesolantDreamer on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 09:56:11 AM AEST
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mankind shall destroy our mother earth.
Great poem very vivid and descriptive. :) |
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Re: Deep Disruption.
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by mehuel on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 12:49:47 PM AEST
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| "stars r feverish in their haste to escape" beautiful words and such true interpretation in "man's pursuit of earths demise".. Lovely end.. Good one.. |
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Re: Deep Disruption.
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 01:27:12 PM AEST
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Many times I have pondered
our
time left here in the universe....
Good topic. |
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Re: Deep Disruption.
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by Daniellemarie on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:34:38 PM AEST
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it sound like the end of the world, you write it so beautifully
-DanielleMarie- |
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