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Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)
Contributed by
UNORTHODOX
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Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 02:44:08 PM in AEST
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Closing in like a nightmare peaking,
broad daylight uncovered secrets,
strayed the path so straight and narrow,
while shadows shift un noticed
Subtle message loud and clear
in parables engraved in stone,
synthetic seasons manifests,
un-holy intervention
In truth awaits ,all answers sought
in faith, the strength to overcome ,
denial blinds us to the fact
that someone's playing God
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UNORTHODOX
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Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 10:51:35 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
really good writing.
blessings,
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Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 04:42:06 AM AEST
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Nice poem with an interesting ending.
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Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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Intersting flow
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Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)
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by Daniellemarie on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:39:37 PM AEST
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I like the whole vibe goin on here nicely written
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Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)
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by 2bpositive on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 01:50:49 PM AEST
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You wrote, "the strength to overcome"
So classic, Yet ,so well done
such a nicely weaved tapestry
of wisdom at that late hour
if I could, I know I would
just want to climb that tower.
Another one of your "great ones"!
Thumbs up!
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Re: Someone's Playing God(Modern Day)
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by desire on
Saturday, 11th August 2012 @ 02:27:38 PM AEST
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The fallen infiltrated the minds
Of weak, the unknowing and ignorant
and now free reign is out of control
I love your work |
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